Demon Underground

Demon Underground by Susan Wright

Should probably be considered the second section of one story. Starts up the moment the first volume ended, and develops the ongoing action. The heroine (Allay) is a demon, but what are demons? They aren’t all evil – in point of fact, the heroine seems to consider them to be worse than they actually behave. I’m uncertain if that is unreliable narration, or if the author wants them to be more evil than she’s actually writing them.

As an unreliable narrator, Allay is very interesting. She seems to be falling in love with a very old demon, but the question is out there, is she in love, or is he manipulating her into being addicted to him?

I also think it’s interesting that the demons use that label on themselves. Are there angels? Are demons another species?

The story is very personality driven. Allay, her offspring Bliss, Ram and his offspring Mystify are emotionally fleshed out, and that seems more important to Allay than what is actually happening in the world.

The story has been examining what the world does as demons, who are immortal and can look any way they please, are discovered to be real. I’m sure it intends to continue down that path. I’ll be reading it when it does.

The weakest point to the books, as far as I am concerned, is that the writing doesn’t carry me along, waiting for the next thing. I keep going back, but I’m very able to put the books down for about two-thirds of each book, then I get swept up in the end. I’d like to be dragged along for more of the book.